Toddler Ice Skates Pictures Re:Please Give Me A Rough Grade For My Writing!!!!!?

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About Us / GCSE grade, what would you), my writing (narrative:
Describe a scene in winter:

"Julia!" They come back here if you have a cold! Cried the mother of the boy, but his plea fell into deaf ears as Julia continued to plunge into a thick, powdery snow, their little hands covered with chilblains.
The paleness of one morning in winter, the hidden around the city, located on a remote mountain in fog. The previous evening the rain had bought a medium wind and fine granite skyfor Liverpool.
The air was cold and wet, press the cold, hard, those who dared to confront him with the fog and cold as death. One example was a few unfortunate owner who was on his way to work, despite, orand weather. What was surprising was the presence of landmarks stunned when he went to work!
A car, which blows around the bend in the road and in open places in the mountains with such force that the body of the car shook and swayed, rocking between the high wheels is like a drunken man himself.
Stacked The few passengers screaming in chorus, when the bus fell into a routine more difficult than usual to drive at breakneck speed.
Saturnino streets were in the acrid smell from the rich mud and the blood of the children who went decided to skate and are in danger.
The soft squish of mud on the floor and dripping water seemed to lead to a window on a dirty view of the winter, so for me anywayhave been very impressed as I am impressed by the landscape.

The detailed answer gets 10 points!